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It's never good to keep things bottled inside,
Tonight those contents are being set free,
I'll let the heart, not the mind, be my guide,
So the truth will be seen, whatever it may be.

Even if I can't say it, I do miss seeing you,
It's a lot lonelier without you around here,
I always wonder if you actually miss me too,
The feeling being a one-way street is what I fear.

Even if I can't say it, I worry a lot about you,
It's the worst feeling when I can't help out,
In bad times of when there's nothing I can do,
I'll still try, that's what being a friend is about.   

Even if I can't say it, I wonder at times about you,
I wonder how the new job is that you're at now,
Things just aren't as fun here without you to talk to,
But work is work, so I'll learn to manage somehow.

So I finally have shown my secrets, broken the seal,
All truths written here, everything opened, every door,
I can only hope now that you see how I really feel,
But all I can do is show you the way, nothing more.
©2005-2009 ~themexican-pi
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My first real poem in about 5 months, wow. It may not be that great, but as I always say, it's a start. Comments are always appreciated, of course!

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:icondigimonsterz:
This is very beautriful, I love it. For my Art Class we are making pieces based on a theme. I wanted to do it based on a poem, illustrating it. I would be honored if you would let me use this poem and illustrate it?

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:iconflamestarphoenix:
Not bad at all ^_^ :clap:

Umm...I'm not a poet so I haven't got much to add...

But your emotion is true and well-expressed, and as far as I'm concerned, that's what poetry is all about.

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Thanks, writing truthfully usually has the strongest emotion, at least in my case.

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:iconthemexican-pi:
Thanks, sure, you could use it, I'd be honored as well as flattered.

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"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

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:iconpearlpoet:
i like this a lot...probably what i needed to hear right now. anyways, good job! :nod: keep up the good work. ;)

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:iconthemexican-pi:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. But how do you mean, it's what you needed to hear right now?

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The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

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:icongodesofthedark:
i like it. i kinda know the feeling that this poem gives. and i am sure she does on some extent. just like i miss my husband on some really small level. but that is the way the world is. damned if you do damned if you don't . but i can say this and i truly believe it. if it was ment to be then it will be. there is nothing that can change that. just like there is a reason for all the hurt i have and have gone though. it has made me stronger and maybe it is preparing me for the next hurt that i will have later on. this i truly believe although i forget it at times. but destiny has it's good and bad things and there is no way of knowing for sure what is in store next

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:icondistilleddepphead:
Beautiful... :heart: Some of those lines really describe how I feel about someone right now. Nice work

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Thanks for liking it, that means a lot. I'm glad to see that someone can relate to my works still.

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The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

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