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The Regret of My Mistake by ~themexican-pi:iconthemexican-pi:



How could I make such a big mistake?
An act that caused this hard heartache,
The memories play back in my mind,
Keeping any other thoughts in a bind.

We were together once in the past,
Back then, I didn't care for us to last,
Without you at first didn't make me blue,
But over time, I found myself missing you.

One day, the fates had been kind to me,
Finding you had brought my heart such glee,
We had started to get close once more,
Now even stronger than it was before.

But one argument brought all that to a stop,
My pride caused the bubble of our love to pop,
By the time I realized how stupid I had been,
It was too late, I had lost you once again.

Now this hurt will always lay deep in my heart,
Stupidity and pride each playing their part,
I didn't want you and I to end up this way,
But looks like I don't get what I want today.....
©2004-2009 ~themexican-pi
:iconthemexican-pi:

Author's Comments

I decided to write this poem after my best friend was telling me why he was so depressed. This poem is for him, hope you're doing ok, dude, wherever you are.

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:iconblackrose762:
thats so cool, well done dude!

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~arastoph :love: ~blackrose762
:) :heart: :hug: :cuddle: :smooch: :love:
The Reaper is always there, Right on your back, His sharpened sythe ready, Waiting to attack..... :pointandlaugh: :paranoid:
:iconredheadedstepchild:
Wow, this definitely gets a :+fav: from me! I can relate to some of what you wrote, and I like the rhyming and the diction. It's a satisfying poem to read. I'm sure almost everyone in the world can relate somewhat to what this poem is about. Keep writing, I like your stuff, glad I added you to my watched list :+devwatch:
:iconhiddentalent91:
You're really good with portraying feelings. Bravo! I don't really have much else to say for this one...
:iconkioni:
Hehn, reminds me of all my exboyfriends... except about the part of wanting to see her again. uu;

He must be very sad

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5FDP- "Everything I touch turns to ashes."
:iconthemexican-pi:
That's good enough for me! Thanks for the kind words! :D

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"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:iconthemexican-pi:
Wow, thanks! :hug: Yeah, I can relate to this in a way also, the situation I talk about here is my best friend's, actually. I'm glad to see you're starting to learn how to use the emoticons and all, sounds like you're getting off to a great start! Thanks again for your great comments!

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"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:iconthemexican-pi:
lol, thanks! Wow, you were up late! :D

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"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:iconthemexican-pi:
Yeah, he is, he's trying not to show it, but I know him better than that. It is bothering him.

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"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:iconblackrose762:
was i?? i cant rembr anymore, i htink my pc clock is wrong or somat cos i dont reembr staying up til 2 ish recently, lol.... ah well

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~arastoph :love: ~blackrose762
:) :heart: :hug: :cuddle: :smooch: :love:
The Reaper is always there, Right on your back, His sharpened sythe ready, Waiting to attack..... :pointandlaugh: :paranoid:

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