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Remembering The Warrior by ~themexican-pi:iconthemexican-pi:





'It is time,' the warrior thinks, 'This must be done.'
Pondering his next mission to save everyone.
Still contemplating, his best friend joins him at his side.
'Why do you choose to do this?' the best friend cried,
'Don't you realize that if you go, it will mean your end?
'I beg of you to please reconsider leaving, my friend.'

The warrior replies, 'Yes, I realize the dangers I face.'
'I still intend to go, even if Death awaits me in that place.'
'I don't want to be thought of going to die, you see.'
'I'd rather be thought about by others being happy.'

'I want the good things I've done for others to always live on,'
'Even in sad times, remember that my strength was never gone.'
'I want everyone to be happy and enjoy life even if I've gone away.'
'I cared for and enjoyed being with everyone every single day.'
'I don't want to be remembered leaving this world with any fear.'
'I want to be thought of going into darkness with a smile so clear.'

'Thank you for being my friend,' the warrior says, 'I must go.'
'I was glad to be it,' he replies. 'We will meet again, I know.'
He went to his end and looked back at what he was there for,  
Before leaving this world forever, he smiled once more.
©2004-2009 ~themexican-pi
:iconthemexican-pi:

Author's Comments

*SeverinaSnape and I were meaning to put this picture and the poem together on this one, but I happened to finish this poem before she could finish her half, and due to certain cimcumstances, we decided that I should post my part first and then she would later catch up with her half. And today is that day .Call it a Mexican/Snape collabo. :D The image is hers and it is with her permission that I use it. The link is here --->[link] I was inspired to write this poem because of Adam's attitude in life, just hearing how he acted was very unheard of to me, it was just simply amazing. So after a lot of thinking, I finally came up with this. Sorry for editing so many times. :blushes:

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:icondrgnlvr:
I like it, touches my heart and is inspirational...probably because i'm a soldier, but i feel happy about it anyways.
One part is confusing though... 'I was glad to be it'

It what?

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Orion knows my name.
:iconthemexican-pi:
Well that's sweet of you to say. :) And good for you for being a soldier, good to keep on going. 'I was glad to be it' < ---his friend was 'it', but I don't like repeating the same noun twice in a line or two.

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"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:icontheflawedone:
:clap: I really liked this! :clap:

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Do NOT click!~~> [link] <~~Do NOT click!

I'm a big champ, No Really!!!
:evileye:

I used to go skinny dipping...Now I go chunky dunking
:iconthemexican-pi:
Aww, thanks, I'm glad to see you liked it, this one was hard for me b/c it's not my normal way of writing, the subject anyways, I was stuck in two parts.

--
"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:iconselva-amarga:
warriors...
sorry i'm speechless...
great poem...

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"come! no night too dark - no road too long
run! no rain too hard - no wind too strong
pray! no blood too red - no cut too deep
stay! no pain too bad - no track too steep
fate! - I’m bound to live my destiny
hail! - my longing for eternity"
:iconthemexican-pi:
Well thanks for commenting on it, I really appreciate it. :hug:

--
"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:iconpokki-chan:
it's really great steve
it's how i feel abt those poor soldiers in the wars *sniff*

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Strawberry Pokki anyone? :star:

If you loved someone, you loved him, and when you had nothing else to give, you still gave him love. :liquify:

:flagcanada:
:iconthemexican-pi:
:) Thanks, but you really think it's that great? If only the soldiers didn't have to do that sorta thing, huh? Having to leave to die?

--
"What is the cure for cancer,
The cure for death itself?

The answer is IMMORTALITY."

member of ~Emotional-Writings, =PoetryPlease, *Circleoffriends
:iconpokki-chan:
yeah i think it's really good
i love watching movies like saving private ryan and band of brothers
but i'm always so sad
it's like this tearing feeling of sorrow and pity within
i mean you know they so don't want to and you wish you could help
it's so senseless the throwing away of lives...

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Strawberry Pokki anyone? :star:

If you loved someone, you loved him, and when you had nothing else to give, you still gave him love. :liquify:

:flagcanada:
:iconsorceressnymph:
:) You already know my thoughts on this. =P Just thought I'd comment though. Haven't seen you in awhile.
Luv Nymph :blackrose:

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